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if i haD the freedom to go anywere on the world were i should go

1/28/2014

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If  I (had the freedom) I( will visit europe). I will want to travel to Europe because Ill want to see in live now are the mithical Europe Stadiums for example in England Ill want to see the Emirates stadium  the Ethad Stadium and the Old trafford. This stadiums have a long and good history, now much legends had played there.
On Spain Ill go to the Camp Nov, the FC Barcelona stadium legends like Ronaldinho, Ronaldo, Deco, Messi and much more. I will go to Santiago Bernabew the stadium of the Real Madrid . The Stadium of Real Madrid had experienced the game of Raul Zidane, CR7, Beckam and much more famous players . My dream is to know more about those mithical stadiums. This stadiums have internal museums and you can also see a cups.
On Germany I will go to the Alianz Arena The Bayer Munich Stadium this stadium has a panel of lights at night, it lights like a Alien spaceship. The Borussia Dormound  Stadium the Borussia  fans do spectaular things to give strenght to theri team. It is aspectacular show. This is one of the much parts Ill like to visit before I die.
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T.Mejia
1/30/2014 11:50:06 pm

You used parentheses somewhere there shouldn't be. Some mistakes in the structure of some sentences. Need comas. Camp Nov?. you mean Comp Nou , Bernabew? you mean Bernabeu. Raul Zidane?
Raul and Zidane. A lot of mistakes but your idea was clear and I like that you would travel to Europe and only visit stadiums.

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Naim
1/31/2014 12:16:39 am

I admire your love for soccer, but I think it would be better if you gave more reasons than soccer. I would really watch spelling, try reading it again.

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L.ArangoO
2/2/2014 04:48:12 am

Inthink your point of view about the place you would like to go its well explained because I can see you really like football. I think you did a good job but I would also sugest you to check some of the grammar mistakes you have.

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A. Fuentes
2/2/2014 09:41:25 pm

Alejo, I like how you explained in this post, but you need to indent and also to have space between your paragraphs because it seems to be very disorganized.

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Ricardo
2/2/2014 09:53:56 pm

I would also go to Europe, and definitively will visit the Old trafford and The Bernabeu because it is the stadium of the best of all.

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S. Escobar link
2/10/2014 07:40:50 am

I will also like to go to Europe and see that kind of soccer. I think you need more detail and improve the grammar but you did a great job!

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L. Herrera
2/13/2014 06:57:37 am

Alejo, I really like your point of view of soccer and the stadiums. You write up good detail and descriptions of this stadiums. You need to improve a little in grammar and some spelling mistakes but yo do a great job.

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A.benavides
2/13/2014 07:27:33 am

I would like that you gave more detail, or other things you could do in those cities. Check your grammar. Interesting topic.

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